The tempest of faith can shake firm beliefs to their foundations.
The evil ever present twists the knife of malevolence,
sucking into cyclonic storms of depravity.
Keep trust, lest talons of the hurricane whip you into burning flames.
Mischief will forever dance around doubtful hearts
with tyrannical efforts to grasp another soul.
Keep firm footings within realms of heaven's assurance.
Author notes
OPTION 2
Pic by freakatha...
In a list
A contest entry
- ~* Where Can You Take This... ~* by Desire.
700 points, ended January 20, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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a good poem, ah mischief, it is a good dancer, for sure. it will kick up many storms during the course of life and love.
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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: Be Aware
Your words tugged at Spirit and I could feel the energy release from Your words...
Love how You used *tempest of faith*
The context and the underlining message
within Your verse...
These lines grabbed and pulled~
Keep trust, lest talons of the hurricane whip you into burning flames.
Mischief will forever dance around doubtful hearts
with tyrannical efforts to grasp another soul.
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Voice!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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beautiuflly written from the prompt and it really brings life to it. well done gran and best of luck always
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