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Life is breath

To wake
To rise
Struggling,
fighting with ones self.
Or maybe following your path
and the destiny
he set out, with ease.

How we don’t more often question
The true big picture, to all this.

Living so freely.

When young
there’s no real pondering
on when it all ends, even how?
Such innocence and engaging
natural smiles.
Sane with their trust
and faith yet to be crushed.
Labelled dangerous to argue
and pushed to go with the flow.
We all do,
only know my eyes are open.
I’m still young and always
enjoy the journey.

Life is breath.
Inhale,
Exhale,
Breathe
it all in.


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  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    The end stanza and it's flow threw me off a little - just the spacing. Apart from that - this piece kept to the same tone and theme, very well penned through-out.

    Thanks for entering,


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    I love this piece.. you show what a deep soul you have. Questioning, pondering... shows your intelligence and depth of thought and feeling!!

    The journey is never ending sweetie.. we change and grow all through our life. I hope your journey is beautiful and happy always....


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 31, 2008
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      I love to think, sometimes just be simple & ponder
      Thank you, I really do look forward to the rest of my life even the trials lol


      Cin


  • CherryOnTop
    January 17, 2008

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    Wow!!You amaze me. You have such a deep and loving soul sweetie. Grasp this journey my niece and enjoy the pleasures of life always.


  • pearl-dragon
    January 17, 2008

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    You said so much within your words, sweetness. You put so much of yourself into your writing which I think is what makes it so readable and easy for people to relate to.

    I love what you write and the way you do it.

    Good luck in the contest Baby Girl

    Love always
    Mum


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      January 17, 2008
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      Thanks Mum, I love that you said that cause I really do put so much of myself into my words.

      Much love , thanks again Mum


      Cin


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    This is such an inspiring poem. You have written this beautifully and with so much wisdom. Well done and all the best of luck in the contest.

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