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Life’s Journey



Thrown into the earth
Without its consent
A seed in the beginning
Struggling to become a tree
An uncharted journey
Dotted by uncertainties
Willed destiny frequently eludes
Memorable for a few
Burden for others
Whose paths strewn with thorns.


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Life is uncharted journey

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  • Naridill
    January 31, 2008

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    Captivating end line - very thought and inspiring into darkness and insanity. This is an intriguing and touch piece on the prompt - nicely done.

    Thanks for entering,


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Excellent work my friend this is really great. Good luck with this piece in the contest. Redwingspirit


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 17, 2008

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    This is lovely. I really enjoyed how you described life as an uncharted journey "dotted by uncertainties" and also how you mentioned it is a burden for others. Well done and best of luck in the contest.


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 17, 2008

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    I like your metaphor behind a seed in the beginning struggling to become a tree.
    A very insightful write my brother


    Cindy