Will my love return to me?
come back home safely?
will I see his face again?
shall it end before it could begin?
If he dies how will I feel?
will I be able to handle this be able to deal?
how can this be?
shall I drowned my sorrow by the sea?
Why does my heart ache so?
should I tell him, let him know?
what if I never have another chance?
Will I ever have that wedding dance?
Shall I hear his voice once more?
might his love my heart implore?
why do I have to wait for his touch?
how can I love him so much?
Will my love return to me?
come back home safely?
will I see his face again?
shall it end before it could begin....?
Author notes
djd this is about a close friend that i fell in love with and he is now at war
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aw, that's so sad. I hope he comes home soon.
Thanks for entering!
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Oh my, this is so... wow.
My heart is aching as I write to you this comment.
I am touched, straight to the core of my heart.
This is so sad...
and it makes me feel like I'm in that confusion state you must be in.
Hope he returns safety, hun.
Thanks for entering. Good luck.
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this is good. War can be such a sad thing. I'm sorry. I hope he's alright. I will lift you and him in my prayers.Thank you for entering. Best of luck.
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