There's a girl in my mirror crying tonight,
there's nothing I can do...
shes had her heart broken
one to many times
shes giving up on love
She's tired of being played
hurt, and abused
The empty lies,
and all the I love yous
She trusted you...
she thought maybe
this time it was true
she believed you
you lied to her
but did you ever think
you were the last chance
that she'd
give her life for you
well she did
and now.....
There's a girl in my mirror crying tonight,
nothing I can say to make her feel all right.
Author notes
Pick your own quote,"There's a girl in my mirror crying tonight,"
A contest entry
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Comments
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Sooo very sad this is!
Excellent use of the quote; this just tugs at the heart strings
All the best to you!! -
I love the title! It's a great quote and you worked it in so well. I really enjoyed this piece. It rings so true.
Thank you for entering this piece, I loved it.
Pixie
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I really really love this, it's so good!
great write =]
freakXD -
a powerful opening line that kept me engrossed through the entire poem. nice use of repetition.
thank you for the entry, and good luck! -
Love it
Both poems I just read I really like what they are about.Love the mirror.
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Countrygurlva
One of my friends is EMO, and I don't mind...I love your poem...I can understand the girl in the girl in the mirror...I was one once.
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I really like the phrase you repeat. "There's a girl in my mirror crying tonight." should be the title of a song.
In line 4 you use the word to and I think it sould be too. Thanks for your time and the entry. -
There's always something you can do, weather it be a smile or a hug or a nice word here and there. but other than that (=P) good poem, well writen, and keep on writing
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