Another angel up above
Sending out the gifts of love
This angel flies, he comes and goes
Handing unloved ones a rose
The red petals are worth a smile
I'd rather have one than have a pile
The scent of the rose is unbelievable
Take in the scent, as it's achievable
Take a moment to breathe and relax
To leave your troubles and never go back
So as you're walking down the street
Say hello to friends you meet
Smiles can mean more than is thought
But the loving rose has been love taught
Author notes
Written for a contest
A contest entry
- A rose is just a rose... by pen-inhand.
1000 points, ended February 6, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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NIce write really enjoyed reading this
nice structure and nice rhyme
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So beautiful, your poem. Lovely in thought and feeling. Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck to you! Kelly
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this is a beautiful poem. filled with so much emotion and very moving. the words flowed nicely and I love the rhyme scheme. great job. good luck in the contest.
kat
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Emotionally Moving, Poet.
~ Nicky♥
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I liked the complexity and structure of this the most, to me it seemed to look and feel like a blooming rose. I also liked the high emotional level and tone that you used. =]
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nevertheless, a surity
in darkness assumed
of silent iris to encircle in arms.
Beautifully penned.
`spiritualangel~
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I enjoyed the flow of your poem alot...good job!
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A wonderful message thinly veiled by a wonderful poem. It rhymed extremely well and it was a great poem!
*All Smiles*
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Meep.
lolz. This is timidish and innocent yet cute. Charming write. ♥
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