The comfort of your loved ones will be best at the Edge.
Looking out over the rocky waters will leave you wondering.
How dangerous life can be.
Lighthouses sit watching over the rocky shores, and guiding boats away from danger.
Our funeral home offers a different kind of comfort for our visitors.
It is sometimes said that the rocky shores might push you to the edge of your grief.
As best as we can we will over look every need you and your family have.
think of us as the lighthouse the safe haven for you and yours.
When preplanning your funeral remember to come to the Edge.
Author notes
this sis a silly poem for a picture contest.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired 1 by jasminerose.
700 points, ended February 10, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great write here
Indeed as we enter the funeral homes unknowingly we all are so close to heavens gate which is on the edge of life as we know it to be . Great piece here
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Wow, this is different Brenda, and a delight to read. Well done.
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haha this is indeed very witty. nice piece i loved it. its different from the usual reads.
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Just coming back to see what this foreboding background looks like...You have done a play of the use of words..I call it play by play....and worked it so cleverly...I think you can do more of these...I know you can...Look for your opportunity. I would put this in rewards....Alot of readers will like it!
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Oh I think this is very clever!!! A great take on the picture prompt!! Gave me that nervous giggle!! lol Eerie feeling to give from a safe haven, love the twist to it!
Thank you for entering this wonderful poem for my contest!!
Jasminerose
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I love your humour and sarcasm. This is a masterpiece of a work....A real credit to you! Cleverly written,satire abounds...Wish that background you originally had could work with white font...it had the foreboding look! Wishing you the best with a super entertaining and humourous poem!
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Bee gee, I love how you added humor to the contest in your take of the picture. So much can be seen when we all look at the same picture and create our own picture in words. Thank you for sharing this one with all of us and best wishes in the contest with it. One note that was mentioned before me is the spelling of "grief". You might want to run the spell check again as the host did say spelling counted. Love and God bless, Joyce
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a great poem although commercial. fourth last line should be 'grief'. i did like this one in a very different way.
hugs,
georgie,
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Whewee! Love the innuendo in this. Pretty weird and impressive
Sorry, this background really needs to go! Have to highlight to read. Try using one pic and a solid background, because not that many people are going to bother to read it
And it SHOULD be read! Best wishes in the comp.
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Spooky
I was on the edge of my seat reading this one! If this wasn't like Edgar A. Poe, I don't know what is!
Ghoul luck in this contest BeeGee!
John
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