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Being You

You say all the right words,
You go straight for the heart,
You play all the right tunes,
You can reach all the parts,
Your not like the rest,
Your smile can melt,
My heart from my chest,
My eyes begin to welt,
I get weak in the knees,
My heart is beating "THUMP",
How can this be,
It takes me out of the dumps,
Turn my frown upside down,
Can you complete me,
You turn my world around,
Just wait ans see,
You just being you,
Is all I ever need,
You turn my sky blue,
You are special indeed.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 28, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Good flow and rhyming in this write; strong imagery.

    Quick spelling mistake:

    Just wait 'ans' see - 'and'

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