Legends of ocean sunset clouds
passing over coastal waters sea
tales of souls lost they enshroud
breathing visions born of theosophy.
Heavenly inspirations sunset sublime
loves romantic passions, singers of song
men's words of wisdom, penned poems that rhyme
feelings in the heart and where souls belong.
Transitions canvas cosmic conditions
brush stroked spiritual epiphany's
painting artist transcending renditions
to natures melodic edge waters symphony's.
Author notes
Picture prompt: 10 lines or thereabouts
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Contest by penman.
650 points, ended January 17, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold-tastic [prewrite contest!] by Tangled Angle.
525 points, ended February 29, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLD SHORTS 1 by Swan song.
2000 points, ended October 18, 2008, 43 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A beautiful write!!! thank you so much
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Lovely imagery...really nice! Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Awesome Write, for a Scene of Delight
You take me and others where we long to go! To refresh our spirits, or take up pen or paintbrush, it inspires us so...Your wording and imagery polish this scene serene to what is worthy of such beauty, and the history of such a place! Absolutely deserving the Gold!Bravo, Brother....A scene to be told by your crafty pen..!
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Absolutely stunning. This left me breathless. A well deserved gold!
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Congratulations on the gold .... damn that bling is blinding but so well deserved HH
Beautifully crafted, the flow, the imagery, the emotions as you paint in words with your pen.
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beautiful hun, this just read as thought the tide is ebbing and flowing with your words, I love the alliteration you've used in places here to, delightfully gold I feel.
Karen
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