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decays

motivated by good intentions,
i'll swoop down lifting you up from the broken road you lie upon,
dusting you off giving you words of better days,months and years,
i'll humor you with embarrassing stories of my past,
i'll paint a smile on your face with random kindness,
i'll show you how potentially you could be treated and nurtured,
i'll forgive you for all that you have sinned,
as if i were Jesus,expressing how you are perfect even though you make mistakes,
i'll fill the hole that decays your heart,
i'll light a passionate fire and mend your broken heart.

Petrified

Petrified to be alone without you.
Frightened like a little kid of the boogie man,
whispering,"please don't leave."
Not sure how to live on my own again,
it's been so long,Iv'e seem to have forgotten how.
Coming home at night has lost all meaning.
Sleeping only leads to me dreaming of you and I sleeping together.
Baby,i'm a complete  and utter disaster without you.
Baby,i'm lost with out you,I can't help my self.
You complete me,your like the top half to my bottom half of a Big Mac,
separate we are just a crazy mess,
but together,baby together we are a crazy delicious mess!

cheers to you and I

Cheers.
Cheers to evaporated tears.
cheers to too many united years.
cheers to you and I.
Cheers to all the hidden lies.
Cheers to the way we fought.
Cheers to all the scream filled conversations.
Cheers to the endless aggravation.
cheers to too many nights of drowning you out with too many beers.
cheers to us overcoming it all;
to watch all of our troubles fall.
Like i fell in love with you.
Cheers to the countless number of times my love for you was renewed.
cheers to you and I.

lingers

her voice still lingers in my mind.
the tone,the slight nervous pitch to her words.
waiting for my reaction and reply.
once i replied,her voice stabled out,
and ended with a small grin of satisfaction.
she tried to hide it,
but she couldn't hold it in.
her eyes grew bright.
Shinning with relief.
i too,gave a little grin.
Which provoked hers to evolve into a smile.
Which provoked mine into a smile as well.
she began to blush,
turning her head letting out a giggle of anticipation.
she pointed behind me,saying what's that?
so i turned to see what it was she was talking about,
with out warning she thrust her self at me,
initiating our first kiss.
I remember it like yesterday.
the taste still lingers on my lips.

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  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    I like how you included a few things in here ("cheers"; "decay"; etc.) and gave them all a short portion of this poem... almost like a collection of small writes, yet they all flow and form together as one piece. Nicely done, bro!
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    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • GoodKnightPoet
    January 18, 2008

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    They say the road to hell is paved with good intentions, but this is motivated by love. A very good poem. I like it a lot.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Excellent Write.
    Thank you for taking the time to enter this into my contest. I wish you the best of luck.

    Redwing Spirit