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Debts

I owe more to Eddie Poe than Shakespeare
In learning to give voice to my love,
For Shakespeare dealt not with unrequited passions,
Whereas, for Poe, they were a demon to drown.

I owe more to Homer than Ovid
In learning the art of sight;
Ironic that a blind bard should prove so good a teacher
When I scribe of your beauty, your crushing, paralyzing beauty.

I owe more to Sartre than to Kant
In forming my pubescent brain into what it now is,
For how can we deny that the universe doesn't care
For any of us, when we ill care ourselves?

Regardless, to each of these I owe a little,
Or, to some, I owe very much,
But, alas, they are all dead now, as dead as Jesus,
So I'll pocket the cash, and hook them up later.

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I don't know... I just don't know....
Written November 11th, 2003

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  • Desire gold member
    November 14, 2003
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    LOL~I was saying to myself~ Self~This is damn funny and I should check out these dead poets ~ Great write and what an inspiration~Hopefully when I die~Someone will be inspired~Other than those who collect the life insurance money~Awesome write and look forward to more~Keep them coming~Big hugs and much love~Desire

  • mydream
    November 13, 2003
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    Very cute!
    Enjoyed it a bunch, needed to read something to pick me up a bit & this did the trick. ~angella

  • Jean Pierre
    November 12, 2003
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    Hook me up...jajaja....Must say truth, stopped by musickey, and likey Guéde I think was calling of the song...Only hear shortly, then error on winamp...Many nicey names they need no creditey no more, methinks you thinkey...Carry on, they sayed in military...keep guns in holstered...Nicey sees all that has on your perspection, and hows somes has maked a printing on a mind...head...maybe hearty? Sticky all over place, keep all have it goody...never know where we go...save it all...

    Jean Pierre


  • MuseStalker
    November 11, 2003
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    Fantastic, as always

    I just wanna be on the sidelines watching the payoff! ROFLMAO Oh, yeah....and "Eddie Poe"....too hilarious for words.