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The Big Secrets

How can i feel this,
I feel hurt,
I feel paralyzed,
I feel sad,
I feel happy,
How can i feel this,
Tell me,
For i need to know,

Why can i feel this,
Has he gone,
Have i dreamed it,
Did i image it,
Is it make believe,
Why can i feel this,
Tell me,
For i need to know,

Is he gone,
?

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  • DeathlyAngel
    January 21, 2008

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    I like how u ask urself these questions. I'm sure u'll find the answers to them soon. Good job. Good luck