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Mafia lover

Bodies laid before me
a million faces
a billion names
and none of them
mattered,
not until I found
you.
Now I'm at the
crossroads
its something I
have to do
but I don't want
to.

Eire Go Brach

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jay Gordon Slept so long

I've killed a million petty souls, but I couldn't kill you

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  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 16, 2008

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    Great job. Short, but to the point. I love that it goes so well with the lyric. Just like the song.

    By the way, you need to add your name to the bottom.