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Buried Alive

Shattered heart
beats to
imaginary
thunder.

As I read
your words
through
weathered eyes,

for you took
my love, and
you buried it
alive.

Author notes

It's 24 words exactly, but that's counting the ones less than 3 letters as well. Enjoy!

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 17, 2008

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    This is wonderful. Great take on the prompt, congratulations on the gold!

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    whisper


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 16, 2008

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    Very visional and deep...strong in brevity and the closing is wonderful...excellent work...
    Thank you for entering!


  • satan-
    January 16, 2008

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    Ooh, very powerful. I love the stanza
    "Shattered heart
    beats to
    imaginary
    thunder." It creates a very powerful picture in my mind. Good luck in the contest!