Crimson red burns fiery hues,
shoulders bare for me to amuse.
Come hither glances to entice,
loving you could be oh so nice!
Tenderness of flesh upon flesh,
sparks to flames two bodies mesh,
Curves mold rounded sensation,
clad in sheerness for temptation.
Dare to make my dream come true,
come pleasure me the night through.
Within the silence make me scream,
awaken me from my sweet dream.
Hands pleasing skin soft and bare,
over and over if you dare.
Yearning for you to make me feel,
lover come make my fantasy real.
In a list
A contest entry
- I rarely sleep in any clothing... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 30, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this is so good, I really enjoyed it.
Good luck in the contest.
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I am glad you enjoyed reading. Thank you for the nice comment. You take care, Sandy
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Very sensuous. I like the challenge "Dare to make my dream come true." "over and over if you dare" is good too.
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Hello, Thank you so much for this lovely comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Hands pleasing skin soft and bare,
over and over if you dare.
Yearning for you to make me feel,
lover come make my fantasy real.
This is indeed a magical response of the prompt..thanks... -
Very Beautiful
Warm and wonderful. Excellent Writing.
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my friend. Always nice to hear from you. Take care, Sandy
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aww, such a sweet invitation to your lover. well done, and floats perfectly with the picture. success in he contest.
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Thank you dear friend. I is always such a pleasure to havew you stop by. I am glad you enjoyed. You take care Jules. Sandy
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so beautifully written with deep emotion of affection and tender love aswell as imagery. well done grammy and best of luck
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Thank you Char. Your comments always a pleasure to read. Take care, Grammy
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