I have a pair of mountains
that rise from peak to peak,
and when it gets quite cold out,
some would take a sneak.
They're treacherous to climb,
But oh so, fun, fun, fun
and if you can manage
I'll let you play until your done.
Author notes
Yeah, yeah. It rhymes. Oh well, I like it.
It gave me another idea though: My friend, Nipples. Hmm...I'll see what I can do.
A contest entry
- The Mighty Nipple! by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended January 29, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre Written Rhyme by piccola.
900 points, ended February 5, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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we were just discussing this today because my grandaughter is wearing a thin shirt and it's cold. heh.
Nice rhyme and it tickled my funny bone. Thank you for your entry. -
This made me smile...cute rhyme...
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lol What is it with everyone entering rhyme. Is there something about nipples that inspires rhyme, and I'm just missing it? lol. But, this was actually a rather happy-happy upbeat kinda poem. Makes me envision dancing nipples in pink tutus or something.
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This is fun, I like it.
Fun Fun Fun.
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now this was good
i enjoyed the hell out of this...cute, funny...all around good...no pun intended..lol
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ooops - ment to add applaud
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Fab titalation!!!! xx
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I like the rhyme. I laughed while reading this. I enjoyed it alot. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessed Be! ~~S & M~~
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lmao,
this is really good,
made me laugh
great work hun,
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