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Smile

Smile,smile,smile
Don't be mean and vile
Laugh at all times,
Let go of all crimes,
Smile,smile,smile

Smile,smile,smile
Don't be so hostile
Try to be glad,
Bad moods are bad,
Smile,smile,smile

Smile,smile,smile
Have good moods last awhile.
If your feeling blue,
Here's what you do-
Smile,smile,smile!

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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    July 29, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. It brought a smile to my face. Enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • daviscth silver member
    April 12, 2008

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    I really like this. The imagery is good and I really like how you started and ended each stanza with the same lines. I might have to try this. Its neat. Thanks for posting this.


  • The Green Elf
    March 13, 2008
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    i wrote a poem just like this any wat i loved it!


  • Tangled Angle
    February 29, 2008
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    Very cheery.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 16, 2008

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    A very touching and sweet poem. I'll do my best to live by it as much as I can. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
    Brian

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