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Snowing.. (haiku3)

Snow is falling now

Softly on the hardened ground

Crystal broken now

Author notes

Well I wrote a poem about two years ago around this time titled "Snow". It was snowing while I was writing it and since today will probably be the only day Alabama gets snow I decided to write another but with a different form. Hope you enjoy.

Kay Laon Anders

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  • sheltered
    May 3

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    I like the metaphoric meaning but I would compress personally since most people generally recognize haiku these day as less than 17 syllable