C reative talent, sensitivity,
A lly with high I.Q. and overview
R esponsive to both seen, unseen, on cue.
M agic smile masks spirit wild and free,
E mancipated, which from knowledge tree
N ew fruits will ever pluck to continue
C hallenges life offers, met by few.
A soul holistic seeks the causal key
R igidity refusing, needs to be
M ore understood when stripping false from true,
E ncouraged on her way - there's much to do
N ow as ever to reach harmony.
CARte blanche she should be given, birthday girl.
MEN all agree she shines as perfect pearl ...
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A contest entry
- Happy Birthday by geron.
450 points, ended January 26, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Courtesy welcome and extended
Comments
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Outstanding
A lovely tribute poem that is delightful to read. The sonnet is well-written with a good use of rhyme and great flow. The poem is intellectual in content and looks forward to new challenges:
there's much to do
N ow as ever to reach harmony.
A fntastic poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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really good
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