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cootie bug

Boys have cooties
and when they sneeze
they blow them everywhere
so be careful
of your heart
the cooties will go up your nose
and travel inside
then you will be bitten
by the cootie bug
and it will steal your heart

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  • Scyphon
    November 29, 2008
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    Aww, do we all have such horrible cooties? I hope not. Cute poem Genna, congrats on your HM


  • penman gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    I love the last line! Great job! Keep writing and best wishes in the contest!

  • benandjustin
    January 16, 2008
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    Haha funny.

    This is too cute!
    God bless!


  • Lady Australis silver member
    January 16, 2008
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    tjhis is very cute darling


  • Melodies
    January 16, 2008

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    Ah, truth spoken here. Yes, watch out for boys because at some time or another, some place, they will try to steal your heart. A darling poem.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    lol. I've never thought of that before. Thanks for sharing; great poem.
    Brian


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 16, 2008

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    hehe this is a wonderful write and it made me giggle.so beautifully penned well done baby sis and best of luck


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    January 16, 2008
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    Wow!
    that is so well said.
    Maybe girls have cotties too!


  • Princess Peach
    January 16, 2008
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    very good...and so true sis! :-)

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