Wise young one
Here in the garden
You are everything
And are equipped
To ride the dream
Spread your imagination
Further than time
Use your inquisitiveness
To seek the golden keys
Follow the signs
Realise the symbols
They are set before you
By mystical guides
Save your dreams
For they are future signposts
Explanations
And medicine
Remember the gifts your elders give you
Scriptures, silver thimble and feathers
Ideas, tales of wisdom and love
Lastly have courage and do not fear
For the fantasy stories are true
You are the hero of your destiny
And an oracle to others
A contest entry
- The Second Chance by BluesMan.
1400 points, ended February 19, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Hello.
An interesting read, our destiny is never beyond us, though at times on our journey we may well think it is, or feel that we ourelves are not equipped to handle it. But what we are lacking in, is a chance to gain something new, and these moments are needed for our destiny waits for us to be ready for them. Synchroncities may well pop in in ‘reality’ or in our dreams, some people like to keep a dream journal, not only to help remember but also as a step into lucid dreaming. Believe in yourself, from within, and fear has no place. Well that is what I got from your poem, a good write.
My regards.
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I feel a tremble in the force...
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Nice aspect
I love the idea of symbols and yet I wonder?. This made me think which is why I liked it.
Good work. Thanks
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What a beautiful write. It plucked at the wellsprings of my soul. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck LOL Bill
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lovely stuff g,consistantly you have a high standard of writing,sometimes I get lost in all the words but they keep me reading.Some seem like a lost tolkien book.
Sorry i have not been here of late but i will try to contribute more writings and comments,best wishes
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glasshoppa... words convey truth in poetry, but beggar who sit in marketplace are deaf to sound of nightingale...
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a lovely mystical oratory. and super advice good luck xx
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