Everyday we do the same things,
Getting on the bus,
seeing the same people doing the same things,
going to school,
nobody has something to say during recess,
learning nothing during class,
taking the bus home,
more people are on it,
more people are awake,
you're the only emo on the bus,
everybody believes in stereotypes and want to see my wrists,
going home and knowing you just wasted another day,
talking to people with an IM-client,
wasting even more time writing it,
knowing that you will waste some other people's time...
Author notes
I was bored and had to much time.
I don't even remember how i got on this site...
A contest entry
- Contest~Your Choice by Dak.
600 points, ended January 16, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
You already wasted some time, do you want to waste EVEN MORE time?
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well i have been n here for a min s you can raed some of mine if you want be yours was ok
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"nobody has something to say during recess,"
That line doesn't seem to work, maybe it's just me, but I think "anything" would work better, or another word altogether.
I feel you could have put more detail, more emotion into this one to make it reach out to grab your reader.
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