Smile at the sky
It’s so pretty
It sets me free
When I’m sad
I go outside
When I’m happy
I go outside
A smile emerges on my face
So far and wide
Just like the sky
The smiling sky whom I smile back to
Smile at the sky
Are you happy?
You’re already outside and smiling
Are you sad?
Get your ass outside and show the sky a smile
Smile at the sky
Smile at the sky
And give him a grin or two
Remember he loves you too
Smile at the sky
Smile at the sky
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Certainly a very well written and enjoyable poem.
It should be noted that this poem also appears on the internet multiple times, under the name Pierre Singla:
http://www.poemsabout.com/sky/
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/smile-at-the-sky/
http://poems.pz10.com/poems/165/Smile/1.html
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Cannot comment...
...I'm a freeversehaterextraordinaire.
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gd write. Like how u portray the sky as a source of happiness and a place 2 go 2 for comfort or just 2 share your happiness
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It's amazing how looking at the sky can give us a sense of freedom. It's a liberating feeling, you've captured that well with this piece Julia
I thoroughly enjoyed it
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thank u very much for the comment
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thanks and i am glad u liked it
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