Middle of the dark of night
so tired eyes blinded
by lack of much needed slumber
The executioner of my open,
wayworn eyes, wailing desolately
I bathe the sand away
As I cradle you close
gazing down upon
your beautiful head
full of pale auburn ringlets
as you nuzzle my bosom
my heart is choked with love
watching you as you suckle,
I am aghast at the intensity of emotions
knowledgable in that not only
did I give you viability
but my body continues
to nourish you
you have completed me
my affinity, my daughter
Jor'Jianna Rayne
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A nice clean heartfelt poem. You will have to keep us apprised as to how things go as the years pass. I found parenting to be a lot more problematic than the mainline culture would have you believe. I have felt every emotion toward my kids at one time or another. Thanks for your entry. Good luck
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She is my youngest and has turned 2 1/2 now. She is for me unlike my oldest two boys like night is from day. She is a constant whirlwind of love, pain, and insanity...I have enjoyed each moment no matter how badly the day had gone, for they are only this way once...Thank you for hosting the contest. You are right though, parenthood is nothing like culture leads you to believe. ~IrishGypsy
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The wonders of motherhood and the bond they two share. It's the first years that truly make a difference in a childs like. Outstanding piece!
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This is great, it captures the joy of motherhood so completly. Beautiful write
thanks for entering and good luck
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I really liked this! and I love her name very beautiful as is she! Wonderfully written keep on penning sweetheart
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This is beautiful, displaying the wonderful love between a mother and her child.
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This is such a truly fascinating dedication to motherhood and the indescribable bond one has with their children. Beautifuly written. Best to you
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Well done, this was truly touching.
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Beautiful! I know that bond between a mother and child, and nursing is a bond shared like no other. You did a wonderful job with this write. Blessings, Patty
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Congrats on your bronze. Love the picture.
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This is beautifully written. Children are a great joy in our lives. I know since my niece Alayna was born 5 years ago much happiness was added to my life. I got someone to spoil. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.
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I like this poem. It screams love... it's just so beautiful! keep up your amazing work. Best of luck.
CrimsonViper
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