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ownership


turbulent triumph

senses awakened

I rise renewed


celebrate nature

feelings restored

I capture all


own the universe

breathe so slowly

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    Sigh... This is nice like running out and taking a deep fresh breathe. Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • flowerystone0
    January 16, 2008
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    This reminds me of one those vacation getaway commercials. I like it!