My heart races when I see you,
My eyes light up when I focus on your handsome form,
As you caress my lips my body melts,
I never want to leave you,
You smell so good,
You make me smile,
I love our cosy nights in together,
Oh my dear, sweet chocolate,
I think I'm in love.
Author notes
Prompt: 3. Chocolate is a better lover than having one who sleeps around
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest. by penman.
575 points, ended January 16, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PW allowed (Friends list) by Riftkin.
475 points, ended February 8, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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nice job
love it!!!
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this is good and I liked it
keep up the good work and I
wish you the best in this
chocolate is great and refine -
Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Haha! XD WONDROUS!
~NM
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