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I Tore Your Heart

I tore your heart from you tonight

You’d given Me all you had but I still wanted more

Pushing you harder, causing you agonising pain

Then I left you weeping there on the floor

 

I tore your heart from you tonight

My fingers gripping, digging deep into your creamy breast

I made you look in the mirror, see what I had done to you

And still I wanted more and refused to let you rest

 

I tore your heart from you tonight

Feeding from you like a vampire blood sucker

Your agony and torment the feast for My hunger

I’m your evil sadistic mother fucker

 

I tore your heart from you tonight

Still I use you, yet never calling you by name

My slut, My whore, degraded and beaten

Humiliation scene, tonight is our game.

Author notes

The use of the cuss has been included as ESMF was a nick name a sub gave me many years ago, it was only when we split she told me what ESMF stood for and in her memory I wear it with pride.

My darker side lives!!

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  • Master Ktulu silver member
    February 28, 2008

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    This has pain and anguish throughout every word, yet this still comes across as deep, emotional and somehow, erotic..a wonderful addition to my contest.

    **Master Ktulu**


  • elemental angel
    February 28, 2008

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    A sadistically satisfying write

    Bravo *rose*


  • Canis Lupus
    January 17, 2008
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    Wicked I loved it. Yeah I agree it could well have been darker, but then in my opinion, even the darkest of the darkest of the dark, can always be darker lol. This flowed well, and I enjoyed reading it, it had me captivated and pulled into the poem Well done and good luck to you


  • Tattboyspet
    January 17, 2008

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    lol - believe it or not you have taken a disturbing pic and made it rather erotic
    The gist behind this write is fantastic, but methinks maybe it could've been darker
    thank you for your entry


    • Corvus Corone
      January 17, 2008
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      OK have just reread your comment, pet maybe I'm disturbed as I found the piture erotic.......... oh no!!!!!!! ha ha ha

      Jem xx

    • Corvus Corone
      January 17, 2008

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      I can be much much darker but tamed it down as this a public site and I'm still relatively new and don't want to offend but who knows next time keep the pics coming

      Jem xx


  • The Poetic Angel
    January 16, 2008
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    Jems M'Lady this is not as scarey as i thought it wud be.well not scarey but You know wot i mean..i actually enjoyed reading it you sure captured my attenion and kept it infact put the way you put it the game sounded quite exciting...well done and good luck in the contest

    xxx Your cheeky lil angel xxx


    • Corvus Corone
      January 17, 2008
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      It was never My intention to scare anyone lil angel, least of all you darling

      xxx Jem xxx

      • The Poetic Angel
        January 17, 2008

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        lol Jems M'Lady giggles a lot of dark writes scare me not terafie me but give me the goosebumps and i know you wudnt wana scare anyone

        xxx Your lil angel xxx

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