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In The End

ridding the world of hate
with simple acts of love


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Man's Progress Thoughout Time

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  • Deja Vu

    That would make a great quote as well. That kinda summed up my motto. Life would be better if people wouldn't hate to such extremities. Acts of love could erase some of that hatred. I'm not saying you stole it BTW if that's what you're thinking, you did it before I was here. What I am saying is great job.

  • graybeard
    April 9

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    Great sentiment! Don't think enough people will participate to make it work though and that makes me sad.

  • So simple and true - congratulations on the gold trophy.


  • Perception
    April 9

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    awwwww... This is such a sweet poem. I really love the message, and how simple this poem is. It isn't super complex and confusing, just to get the point across.

    I love how easily this is understood, and taken to hart.
    beautiful!

  • I like this. It's really short, but stright forword. This is amazzzzzzzzzing. It really makes you think! Good job. I love how short it is, but at the same time it says sooo much!
    ~ xoxo
    Sierra.


  • Firequeen
    April 9

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    Amazing.
    short but it speaks volumes.
    Loved this.
    so worthy of gold.
    Congrats.
    Keep the ink flowing
    fire

  • Superb Plus +

    Aye, 'tis a good idea, and very well expressed, indeed. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.

  • well how about that?! lol...you said it all in very few words! I mean like this comment on your poem is way overblown in comparison! I loved it...sometimes it really is all about simplicity...and LOVE! keep them coming! - Kendal

  • What a wonderful concise and positive message. Congratulations on the Gold.

  • ea silver member
    April 8
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    Not sure why you removed this but it's very good and stood a good chance in the contest.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    January 19, 2008
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    For one sentence, this sure packs a punch. It is the simple things that we see, even if we don't realize we see them. Love the power in these words. Now if only more people would read this, and take it to heart. Thank you for entering and good luck, Storm


  • paullallady silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    This is very short and yet it holds
    many truths and much depth. For the one
    thing that can fight hate, is love.

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