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Ascention

Eyes glazing
With final breath
Behind blinding light
God awaits

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  • songstress80
    October 28
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    a wonderful spiritual short


  • Jay81
    April 29
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    10 deep words sir...


  • tears.of.silence
    March 15

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    Very nice. Short, sweet, and to the point. I like this. I don't write much short poetry... I'm lucky if my words come out in less than 20 lines. So great job. Kahy


  • TOEchikira
    November 30, 2008

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    oh wow. ive read poems about dieing but none of them achieved it like this one. its short and to the point, just like ur last moment, but its very vivid at the same time. <3