The whispers in the wind.
They tell me to move along.
To a different beat.
A different pace.
They say I have a place in this world.
Or at least something that needs done.
The whispers in the wind.
They tell me not to worry.
To forget whats now.
Forget whats then.
Forget whats there.
Just live.
Just fly away with it.
What seems bad now.
Isn't really.
Just let it go.
A contest entry
- Anything go's-for people who do not have gold trophy's by Stormy Days.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
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At times I read a poem that toouches me and as I read this I feel such a deep sense of sadness and a wish to be heard. All i can say is that you have magic in your pen young poet and that means you must write. The world awaits young poets.
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Wow what a sensitive poem I loved this great job lil sis!
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this is good
Thanks for entering and good luck -
to follow ones heart and soul
and be the self that you are meant to be
is the greatest treasure ever
Riftkin -
very nice, sensitive poem here... wonderful mood, so calm and the message is one for all of us, let go of some things...so very well done here...PK
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I like the flow of this. It's so airy, and free. =]
Good write here....
Lysander
<3
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