Finally I’ve got a mate
for life once treated me fair
Naughty brown eyes sparkling,
a soft skin, despite all of the hair
When you lay here next to me
with your tail towards the ceiling
I have to touch your butt at once
because that’s such a sensual feeling
On your back you excite me so much more
The strong parts I have to watch close
A huge belly keeps me focussed
and I can’t stop kissing your nose…
My hands are gliding over your head
as I hold you in my arms at night
Forgive me if I go insane
but you make my life real bright
Old and weary, I don’t give a damn
not even if you lose your hair
Nobody will ever take your place
And forever you will be mine, I swear…
Author notes
This bear I got from my lover...and whenever she is not around he is taking her place...*smile*..so yeah...I was laying next to my bear...
A contest entry
- TO BE LOVED by Whispering Wind.
900 points, ended January 21, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
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Finally I've got a mate
Comments
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Awwwwww
this was really sweet.
I liked this
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Awh!
This was so sweet ; I've formed a huge attachment to some of my teddies as well, but this was on a whole new level;
You've really formed a relationship with this guy, lol
Great job; and gorgeous picture xD Thanks for entering! -
that's so great
I love it
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He is my twin, he is my twin(lol)! Guess that means I have to come over and be there when your lover is there so there can be more than one Ted E Bare(lmao now)! Great poem and you have my Big Paw of approval. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention.
just because I can, nanananana!
because I want to!
for you to have always!
for this special day!
Ted E (the twin-lol)
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You can come over any time Ted E Bare...my E bare's twin is always welcome here with us...lover around or not
Thnxs for making our day....and for making me smile
XXJeannette
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Make some room twin Ted E, I'm jumping in there to get some of that great loving that you get(lol)
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An E Bare twin in my bed..LMAO...
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YEP!!!!! I think I will be the one having the most fun in that bed(lol)
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Great flow, and perfect adjectives!!!!
This just screamed out to me love and feeling! You definitely did a great job with this write! It flowed so well I just shot right through it and was like, wow, that's a great write!!! That is good though, that you have an inatimate object that can make you so happy that you don't always need another living being, especially a human always there to comfort you, usually I need a girl to make me happy, but I am getting used to not really having any lately, how about my 5 year old labrador? She is so cute and nice, this poem reminds me of having her sleep in my bed next to me sometimes. Great job and good luck!
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hahaha cute!
I think I just figured out why. Because i look almost like your teddy.
As a young one I used to have a stuffed gorilla named Mugz.
He was my boxing sparing partner and team mate on my imaginary football team. hahaa.we used to fall off the bed together when tackled. Thanks for the memories.
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hahaha well I think you wouldn't fit there then, would you???
Just to tall I think
But Mugz would fit next to him...then I would have two sparing partners and sometimes even three
Thnxs for reading and your lovely comment
Take care big Teddy, of yourself and your new sparing partners
XXJeannette
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LOL... I do love it!!! nothing can compare to the old fashion love of the teddy bear...sighs...Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful heart with me and for entering
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It for sure is unconditional love sweet sis
But so is my love for you
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Always here to make me smile and feel happy, that's what you do...
XXJeannette
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lol...This is wonderful J... Do you know what love I have a little one I sleep with. He belonged to my Mama. I would love a very big one for Valentines Day though. Hell there is no love like a Teddy Bear love, their love is unconditional...
I love this piece!!!!!!!!!!!
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Unconditional it is indeed..the love from my bear...and I am sure your mothers love was that too, so it's a double love from your little bear...
You know what????Give me your adres and I will think of you when I find his Twinbrother
Luv ya
XXJeannette
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Hey!! Gimme back my bear!! I miss my bear, so I can relate to this awesome write! Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Hey beautiful Lady Just give me your adres and I will send you his brother
XXJeannette
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LOL very cute twinny
i miss reading your writes! yay!
Tasha
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Hehe! This really made me smile! If you didn't know it was about a teddy bear, you could easily imagine something else. I loved that. It's very well written, and just really sweet!
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hehehe the pic made me laugh out loud just to start with and then the poem really did make me laugh after that, I don't know if it was meant to be funny, but you sure made me smile!! thanks for that but, hey, yeah, you can't beat a pet or teddy bear as a best friend either! good luck in the contest
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Your right...it was supposed to give a smile and this bear is my best friend too, and he also keeps me warm at night
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Oh how sweet, being your bear buddy would be full of kind surprises. --- Thank you. --- I’ll read this to Bene and Rupert. They like you too. --- http://www.jeh.org/b2 --
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Bene and Rupert are much liked too
If they would ever come to visit me I will surprise them too
My bed has enough space for the three of them
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