Villains are scary villains are mean but it will take a real villain to take any thing from me
Dimiond, rubbies and money 2 why cant they just take my brothers shoes? Smelly and yukky not worth 5cents surly they should take them insted....
A contest entry
- Gold Anyone? by loveisthemoment.
600 points, ended February 1, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
why swear i am only 11
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This is really funny
I think you did good for someone that's just 11! Thanks for your entry and best of luck 
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This is really good, it was funny and and made me laugh, but you need to check your spelling closely ok
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this was interesting.. thanks for entering!
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