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Midnight After Childhood

Glittering twirling golden lights
A glow upon my sun burnt face
Above my head the stars they shine
Like candles in the darkest night

Around like children spinning fast
The lights whirlpool of tiny stars
Polka-dots in the midnight
My childhood of stars please last

And spinning forward like a vine
Around I run with father time
Till stars are just about my past
All though are their no longer shine

Author notes

This is another poem written for Creative writing class.

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