Two minds but one heart
Listening to each other
Lost in rapt attention
Without burden of thoughts
Author notes
perfect listening takes place, when thoughts do not interfere
A contest entry
- 20 words only #2 by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended January 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like the meaning in this. It is always nice when you can speak freely and the understanding on both sides is there. Well done and thank you for entering my contest.




Delila

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Wow, such a small amount of words saying so much

I love your author notes aswell and how true
Gifted writing again brother

Cindy

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Great take of the prompt This is very good. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.



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