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Rinse and Repeat

What's one more time?
Did I forget to turn off the stove?
I think the microwave should be unplugged.
I have to be at work in thirty minutes...
but this floor looks a bit dirty,
and this table needs dusting.
How could this all get so grimy?
Ugh, now I am going to have to wash my hands...
Clean? No, let's wash them again...
And again...
...
Hour late and the boss is calling me.
I think I'll say I'm sick today...
God..
Deep inside I beseech you,
HELP ME.
Free me from my tormenting existence,
Mother... Father...
Is anyone there to save me from myself?
This will consume my life until...
Oh God no...
WHAT'S ONE MORE TIME...

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  • SunsetDreams
    January 16

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    I think this is definitely getting there but could use a bit more work. Maybe focus more on the one thing... like handwashing. So many times there are also thoughts like "I know i don't need to do this" "I know they are already clean" but arguing with oneself doesn't help. The only release for the anxiety is to wash. Anxiety/obsession: one thought and then compulsion: what one does to get rid of the nagging thought.