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The music flows through Me

The beat of the night
takes over me once again
Everything is different
even under my skin
Reality is lost
as I move with my soul
My head feels light
as my eyes bounce and roll
Tingles fill my body
as the energy grows high
The music flows through me
as my eyes see the sky
Caught up in the moment
I am one of the children
of the night
Jumping and spinning
the beat heals my fright
The faster it gets
the higher we soar
Hearts beat faster
exticy for sure.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 6, 2008

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    in the last line i think exticy is supposed to be ecstacy.....other than that great write!!! and good luck with the contest!!!


  • kIrst1
    January 16, 2008
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    love it

    defiantly how feel when im dancin at a rave


  • SHadowHex666
    January 16, 2008
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    nicely done

    you captured the feelings that we all have at a rave