I don't want to do this, I tell him.
But he says "Come on baby"
And throws me on the bed
And unbuttons my shirt
He kisses my neck, my chest, my lips
And raises my skirt.
"We can makeout, but no sex," I say.
"Please baby? Is it that you dont trust me?"
"No, I trust you," I reply. "Its just.."
He continues kissing me and soon enough
He grinds his pelvis hard on mine
It feels good to me, but I dont want further
He lowers my stockings and unzips his pants
As soon as he almost enters me,
I push him back.
"Im uncomfortable," I say.
He grunts. He is angry. There is awkward silence.
After a sigh from me,
I say: Sorry. Go ahead.
He gets happy again, and kisses me.
He enters me rough,
I am ready to cry
But my fears hold me back inside.
He genuinely moans, and I pretend
He pulls my hair and it hurts,
But I say nothing.
As he continues recieving pleasure,
I turn my face away from his,
hoping he wouldnt see the tears in my eyes.
After what seems like an eternity,
He stops.
And says "Damn baby that was good."
He gets off of me to zip up his pants.
Still lying down, I button up my shirt,
Pull my stockings back up, and lower my skirt.
I go to the bathroom, wanting to wash myself,
But instead end up crying.
Author notes
Ah people shutup and stop arguing about this!
A contest entry
- RAPE by InMyFlames.
300 points, ended January 22, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think of my poem?
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If this is what occured....it was not rape...pressured to do something ya didn't wanna do...but not rape..you said yes...you allowed it..at least in this piece...that does not constitute rape...
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She only said yes so that he wouldn't get REALLY forceful and end up hurting her. She said yes, but she didn't really allow it. It was still rape.
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I'm sorry to inform you but rape is a flat no that is ignored...once yes is said...you have given your permission...whether you wanted it or not..yes means yes, no means no...she allowed it...by saying yes plain and simple
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alright you guys just stop arguing about it no offense but i dont care what negative things you have to say about my poem I will keep the title, i still view it as rape, if you dont agree that's fine by me but if you're going to keep on arguing with celticjedi or whomever else just leave the page plain and simple like that
again, i dont mean to offend you, i just dont see the point of arguing over something like this
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the last line hits home you made this hard for me to enter though
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