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Tomorrow Never Came

I.   Diana
 
     I saw your death floating
     like phantasmic prisms;
     creatures of nightmares
     that crawled in the corners
     of my room late at night.

     They whispered ghastly words
     and showed me scene of death,
     rows of stained skulls glittering
     like rubies in candlelight.

     Grisly heads turn slowly
     on delicately splintered pikes,
     phantoms of smiles etched on them.

     "I told you the reaper was coming
     that the fever was more than the flu."

 

 

 

II.  Beba

    

      The angels fought and skies clashed

      while rain slid down shattered windows

      and breezes froze aching limbs.

 

      The car made a warm coffin

      where it was so easy to just drift off.

 

      "We never really left anything unspoken

      except what happened in your past.

      I wish you had told me about your parents

      and your life.

      Then maybe you'd be more than a faded sketch."

 

 

 

 

III. Nana

 

      Trembling hands dried dying tears

      that stained soft cotton blue.

      The pain of bedsores unbearable.

      Eyes clouded, forgotten memories

      just out of earthly grasp.

 

      Impaired movement and arthritic fingers

      cannot dial phones.

 

      "I wish I had been there to hold your hand

      and watch all the pain end. I love you."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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If Tomorrow Never Comes

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  • Ellis gold member
    January 20, 2008

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    Your positive outlook is so inspirational. I am boiling up my stew pots -- lots of humans coming (or going, whichever way you want to look at it). Yes.

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  • Tarja
    January 16, 2008

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    I love that you wrote to more than one person... all of your messages were heartfelt and emotional. I was truly touched by your entry and I thank you for putting so much thought and effort into it. Good luck.

  • celadia
    January 16, 2008

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    this was beautiful in a tragic way, i think this is publishable, you should try, one thing, the first is called diana, is that the princess, i think people will think it is and then the second has a car crash, these seem to me to be all people you knew who died, it is a beautiful lament, i don't want to be too critical, but people should know who these people were, but it was so great.


  • maa gold member
    January 16, 2008

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    what a profound poem that creates strong emotional response in the reader ... you are a magician of words and imagery ... thank you for sharing your soul ...


    marion