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forgivness(rape)

I forgive you for all you have done
You robbed me of my light You robbed me of the sun
In a darkened room I sit and cry
Asking my self why , why?

I forgive you from stealing something I can never regain
For putting me through so much pain
Of my innocence that you stole
For making me lose control

The scars on my wrist just show what I had to endure
But I'm all better now rest assure
And I am beautiful but you will never see
How much you effected me

I forgive you for all you have done
Because now I found my light , I found my sun
And even though you hurt me with all you did say or do
I will start anew ,I am able to forgive you.

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  • SoxxDisastrous
    January 20, 2008

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    You are such an amazing writer, and you are such an amazing person. Great job with this poem, and best of luck in the contest!


  • InMyFlames
    January 16, 2008

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    "The scars on my wrist just show what I had to endure
    But I'm all better now rest assure
    And I am beautiful but you will never see
    How much you effected me"

    great lines thx for ur entry

  • PoodleBoy13
    January 15, 2008

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    :)

    forgiveness is hard, not many can forgive people for that
    kudoes for the writing and the strength to forgive


    PEACE&WAR
    The -poodle boy-


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    January 15, 2008

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    Words of strength and resiliance!! It takes a strong person to forgive their abuser and reclaim their life. Very well written!