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A soul so free

with one great reach
one endless breath
of love and hate
and life and death
an eternal renewal
a soul so free

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    January 16, 2008

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    I really like the concept of this piece.
    You have done well but I think you could have done without so many "and"s Thank you so much for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • The Kake Show
    January 15, 2008
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    this is amazing!!! it so simple yet beautiful i love you so much