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No One

No one knows of the crime done to her,
As she sits, an innocent blur.
No one knows of the child she bears,
No one feels her countless tears.

No one was cornered in the alley dark,
Because she had no car to park.
No one was shoved against the hard wall,
No one heard his slimy call.

No one felt his greasy hands,
Sinking in the depths of sands.
No one was attacked, a victim of rape,
Her mouth covered by pain’s unforgiving tape.

She sits alone in a crowed room,
Quiet surrounds her as she faces doom.
Her every step of caution’s hate,
Intertwining with her destined fate.

Just an employee,  a desk and chair,
Life to her, is not only unfair.
For her and the breath inside her womb,
Now sent to an early tomb.

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  • InMyFlames
    January 15, 2008

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    i love how this is a new poem, i usually get just pw well done, i like your style. i love the lines

    "just an employee, a desk and chair,
    Life to her, is not only unfair.
    For her and the breath inside her womb,
    Now sent to an early tomb."