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Blue

Turn me blue.
Paint the sky black.
My heart is  blue.

My hair is blue.
Lets dye everyone blue;
like the evening sky.

I am feeling so blue.
Now I am sick of being blue.

My food is blue.
My gun is blue.
My computer is blue.
My balls are blue.
My skin is blue.
My pills are blue.
My soul is so blue.

Now make me BLUE.

Author notes

i was listening to Eiffel 65- I'm blue(daba-de-daba-die) and thought what the hell why not.

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  • grapefruite
    April 5, 2008
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    The first stanza is thought provoking.


  • Florida Sunshine
    February 24, 2008
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    Blue is my favorite color ~ I luv blue and all the shades of it ~ the repeating the word blue might be a tad over-the-top ~ Nice job overall ~ it's nice to see how our surroundings can influcence us ~

    Thanks so much for entering the "Set the Bar" contest ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ Best of luck