I let my heart reach out
and fall gently in your hand
As a feather fall from a bird
as is sores over my head
And you help it there
smiling and laugh
promising me you would never drop it
and never drop it you did
You threw it in my have
With your full strength
And showed me how much of a fool i was
For ever believing in me and you
And then run up and stomp on it
And cause it to collapse
And you act like you care
as we say good by
when i can see
that it was all a lie
Author notes
number 6
rubedo or is you looking for my rl name sean
A contest entry
- 12 options now wow! by BeautifullyBroken42.
410 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know what I need to do to improve please
Comments
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This was a neat and intresting poem that caught my eye. this was the first poem i read about #6 and i think it was neat! True feelings were put into this and I love it.
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Thank you
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