My lover took me in his mouth
And sucked and slurped.
Yummy-yummy-yummy-yah!
How I loved it as he ate me
The juice dribbling down his chin,
Wantonly in gay abandon.
Yummy-yummy-yummy-yoo!
And my tasty essence
Going down his throat
As so often before.
Yummy-yummy-yummy-yi!
I am a gay pomegranate.
Please tell me what you think
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Haha. Amazing (:
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Superb
The best laugh I've had all morning long. Very well written indeed. Hope all is going well with you.
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twit! xx
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You big fruit.
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FaT FACE.
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This is definitely a view of a pomegranate I would not have come up with myself. I loved it - you make it seem so delightful to be a pomegranate.
Good write, and good luck in the contest! -
This made me laugh out loud!!! A gay pomegranate!! That's awesome!!
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lol! I enjoyed this
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