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Words for Walt

I am written by your poems ...
see me: i am the gnome
of your thoughts ...
slipping away
with your earthy words
becoming water
and wind
and pliable clay
becoming memory
moon
everlasting day

I am the tree
with your evergreen eyes
hearing and smelling
and touching blue skies
I breathe through your leaves
this longing for rest
so carry on
writing
in quest of the sun

myra 2002

Author notes

We write our universal self with the repetition of wonder ...
Written February 2nd, 2002

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  • Jaden silver member
    April 8, 2005
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    In other words, I like.


  • Jaden silver member
    April 8, 2005
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    Nice.


  • myrataal silver member
    June 19, 2002
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    Thank you for reading, zuzus ... You are so kind.

  • zuzus petals
    June 17, 2002
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    neutral

    this is a good one! I really like the subtle style of ryming you had going on--it's not too forced. Great job. -zuzu

  • myrataal silver member
    February 3, 2002
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    Why, you two Masters ... With the help of the Tender Desert and the Burning Passion I may make it here ...! Thanks for watching over me. LOL

  • Walter Burns
    February 2, 2002
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    heheheheh surfing it up to the top

  • Walter Burns
    February 2, 2002
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    Thank you for this it brightens my day. Its a good write on its own for sure

  • Desert Simba
    February 2, 2002
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    superb


  • myrataal silver member
    February 2, 2002
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    For Walter Burns, who wrote awesome poetry.

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