Blackened in her eyes with the world against her
Knew not what to do but to lay just right there
So confused about the life now before her
Majesty of emeralds and has been cured
So long she’s been lookin’ on to the broken
Amid a heart that questions; still is hopin'
What’s in this world that could possibly save me?
Anyone could help; maybe a devotee?
I’m gone from this world and am reaching hands out
What if all this testing just all turns about?
I’m queen of my own world that no one can save
Look at my face darlin’; doesn’t it look grave?
Ciao tutti, unlike myself I hope you behave
A contest entry
- pic contest by Dark Whispers.
425 points, ended January 28, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Bigger, The Better by lowercase prelude.
900 points, ended August 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Oooh. interesting. best of luck in the contest. I especially loved the last 3 lines...
write on.
~*~SP~*~
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i like this
very well penned
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Great take from the picture prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
♥
whisper
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