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Virtue & White Wings

I feel you watching me

Eyes staring
Through the dark

I reach for you
But never touch you

You run from me

Why?

Does my light
Intimidate your mind?
Swallow your senses?

My only wish
Is to save you
From your cage of shadows

Let me reach you

I'll stop your pain
If only
You would let me

I am nothing
Without your faith
Your trust
Your love

If I cannot reach you with
Light

Then perhaps
For you
I must stain
These white wings

Black

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FlurryOfDancingFire

4. write about angels

lolT his is ironic x3 I just entered another contest and chose the title 'Sin & Red Feathers'...and now, after reading it... it is largely based off of that poem...>>...<<... oh well, good luck with your contest! ^^

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  • Count Orlok
    January 20, 2008
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    I meant "bloodrush". Sorry.


  • Count Orlok
    January 20, 2008

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    The taste of death...the beating of the black wings of the vampire...the joy of the bloodrish...this is a fine poem.


  • BeautifullyBroken42
    January 16, 2008

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    wow! this is a really awesome poem. I really understand it and love it! great job and thanks!
    ~ruth~