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An inner strength

When your words fail
and your heart breaks
and no one will forgive
your past mistakes--

When your tears fall
and your body falters
and your faith shattered
upon religious altars--

When your love dies
and your soul fades
and your hope is gone
into various shades

Of Doubt--

Look within, and hope you see
strength, grace, and destiny.

A contest entry

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 23, 2008
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    A beautiful piece of poetry, very inspiring and with a solid message. Bravo!


  • moluv10
    January 26, 2008

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    Inspiring! I love the last two lines of this wonderfully penned piece. Love the flow and the rhyming. good luck in the contest.


  • nilav
    January 26, 2008
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    good poem....i liked it


  • Angierie
    January 16, 2008

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    Ooooo.. I like it!!

    Thanks so much for entering!!

    Angie