When your words fail
and your heart breaks
and no one will forgive
your past mistakes--
When your tears fall
and your body falters
and your faith shattered
upon religious altars--
When your love dies
and your soul fades
and your hope is gone
into various shades
Of Doubt--
Look within, and hope you see
strength, grace, and destiny.
A contest entry
- Pick a TITLE and write.. Very simple!! by Angierie.
700 points, ended February 23, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what this makes you feel
Comments
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A beautiful piece of poetry, very inspiring and with a solid message. Bravo!
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Inspiring! I love the last two lines of this wonderfully penned piece. Love the flow and the rhyming. good luck in the contest.


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good poem....i liked it

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Ooooo.. I like it!!
Thanks so much for entering!!
Angie






