I’ve known you for so long
Never seeing you smile
To light the joy upon your face
Keeping it blank
Holding up that wall
Always plastering a fake
Thinking you’re fooling them
When all you’re doing is
Cutting the hole deeper within
Wanting to see your grin
Bring pleasure to your soft eyes
Letting you enjoy the thrills of life
Wishing I knew how sire the secret
To make you giggle
Seeing it once
That half turn smile
Like you have a hidden tale
The beauty in your eyes lasting only seconds
My only desire is to see you smile
Author notes
Combined Titles~ I Wish and The Beauty of His Smile
A contest entry
- Pick a TITLE and write.. Very simple!! by Angierie.
700 points, ended February 23, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lovely sentiments here and it flows just lovely.
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Not a problem at all.
Great job!
Thanks so much for entering!!
angie
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"Seeing it once
That half turn smile
Like you have a hidden tale
The beauty in your eyes lasting only seconds
My only desire is to see you smile "
Your combination of the two titles actually worked.
You did a good job here.
Good luck in the contest.
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