Didn't know I had it in me...
To stand up for whats right, for those people who can not see.
I didn't know I had it in me...
To be what I am and not throw away my hearts key
I didn't know I had it in me....
To befriend someone so sad
I didn't know I had it in me....
To be harassed but not so much as flee
I didn't know I had it in me....
To say how I feel.
I didn't know I had it in me....
To figure out whats real
I didn't know I had it in me..
To dive into your life
I didn't know I had it in me...
To find out what it feels like.
I didn't know I had it in me...
To hold your hand as you wept
I didn't know I had it in me
To hold those secrets tis long I've kept.
I didn't know I had it in me...
To not let people stand in my way of the one thing I truly love
I didn't know I had it in me..
To fly on the wings of a dove
I didn't know I had it in me.
To dance the night away.
I didn't know I had it in me
To hold you til the first of the suns ray.
I didn't know I had it in me..
To be rejected once or more
I didn't know I had it in me
to collapse laughing with you right on to the floor.
I didn't know I had it in me
To look into your eyes.
I didn't know I had it in me
to say so many good byes.
I didn't know I had it in me..
To write this poem this day
I didn't know I had it in me
To this much I say
Author notes
this is kinda about all aspects of my life
I am obsessed with Across the universe
A contest entry
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I liked this, but to be honest I felt the repetition was a bit overkill. But you've some good points here.
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quite an interesting piece
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I like the repetition in here, because it is so expressive and deep with what you are feeling. The rhyme is a little forced in some areas and the length might be a tad bit too long for a repeating poem, but overall it gets its point across. Great job!
Thanks for entering! Good luck!
M a r l u x i a
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i wanted to go see that movie good job thank you for entering my contest it was a pleasure reading your poem you are a very talented writer
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This poem is soooooooooooooooooooo repetitive. The ellipsis get really annoying as well as "I didn't know." It carries on too long for it's own good.
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Sounds to me like you are a very strong person.. one who will stand up and fight for the cause.
Amazing work and thanks OODLES for entering!!
Angie
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Sweet!! (as in, not sugary sweet...like, AWESOME!! lol) Quite expressive!! Good luck in the contests! I'll bet you do well!! Awesome job!!
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forgot to appluad. my bad
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great poem...you might want to fix the spelling error on the second last line. other than that this is great. good job!
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this is so cool and i can just imagine you falling to the floor with your best friend.
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